AI Flight Simulator / Exercise 3
Putting it right
Practise correcting a draft instead of starting again.
The situation
You asked for a short notice for your community group's newsletter: the monthly meeting is moving from Tuesday to Thursday. The draft that came back is fluent, nearly right, and wrong in three ways at once.
Step 1 of 4 is open.
Step 1 of 4
Find the problem that matters most
Read it as the person who has to send it to forty households.
You asked
Write a 150-word newsletter notice: our monthly meeting moves from Tuesday to Thursday, starting in November, same time, same hall.
The assistant replied
A change to your diary, please! From November our monthly meeting moves to Thursday evenings, same time and same hall, so do come along. We know Tuesdays have been a fixture for years, and we are grateful to our 200 regulars for being so flexible about the change. If Tuesday still suits you better, our committee would love to hear from you at the usual meeting on the first Tuesday of the month. You can confirm your attendance at communitygroup.org.uk/meetings.
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